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Pit Bull Poem

  1. Eternal Evolution profile image84
    Eternal Evolutionposted 7 years ago

    You judge me without knowing what good I hold inside,

    You think I am a monster because of all the lies.

    I am breed to please you, whatever that may be.

    So if I am a fighter don't dare lay blame on me.

    You make me what I am so be careful what you do,

    All I really want is to share my love with you.

    Look into my eyes, a monster won't be seen,

    Love, loyalty, and friendship; does this sound mean?

    People say I'm bad, they say don't ever trust a pit,

    But really I'm a good dog; I just need a chance to prove it.

    So please don't listen to all the lies they spread,

    We are not Monsters, that's all that needs to be said!

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      isis_dreams2002posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I have to say what a wonderful poem and i agree with what it says and you put it so lovely.

    2. mohitmisra profile image61
      mohitmisraposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Very cute smile

    3. Kushal Poddar profile image54
      Kushal Poddarposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      "Love, loyalty, and friendship; does this sound mean?"
      It is meaningless things for many a men who cannot match a pit.

  2. Eternal Evolution profile image84
    Eternal Evolutionposted 7 years ago

    Than you isis_dreams2002, i wrote this a bit ago and posted it as a blog on one of my myspace pages. I though it would be neat to post it on her. big_smile

  3. Kushal Poddar profile image54
    Kushal Poddarposted 7 years ago

    Very good writing

  4. paulthomley profile image60
    paulthomleyposted 7 years ago

    Thanks for the poem! I wish everyone understood...

  5. Dame Scribe profile image59
    Dame Scribeposted 7 years ago

    Look into their eyes and how can one turn away. I love dogs irregardless of their breed. smile very nice. Thank you.

 
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