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Hi all

  1. Pristine profile image60
    Pristineposted 7 years ago

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Breathing-Fear

    This is my first hubpage. A prose poetry.

    I would love to hear your feedback. Be it positive or negative, please help me to improve.


    I dedicate my prose to Wole Soyinka. smile[

    1. apeksha profile image61
      apekshaposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      hi !
      welcome...

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        Pristineposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Hey!
        Thanks smile

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    johnhardposted 7 years ago

    Pristine your description is too short to be commented...i hope you always get the positive one but first increase your profile.
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    1. Pristine profile image60
      Pristineposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks Sir,I joined the HP today. By description, you meant my prose or my profile description?

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 7 years ago

    I have read your poem, and put a comment on for you....
    keep writing and a very warm welcome....

 
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