The Ultimate Failure

  1. Apae profile image71
    Apaeposted 8 years ago

    Stare into the blinding whiteness
    Which inspires fear
    Listen to the voices muttering
    Something you can't hear
    Feel the still, cold air
    About your semi-naked body
    Lick your lips and taste your tongue
    Lubricated - bloody
    Smell the clinic scent of bleach
    Hate courses through your veins
    Society's the one to blame
    For causing all your pains
    Now just lay back, pass out and watch
    The nurse perform you surgery
    Maybe next time there'll be success
    Escaping from this perjury.

  2. Paul Edmondson profile image
    Paul Edmondsonposted 8 years ago

    We love poets here.  You might like Drax's if you haven't seen them yet.

  3. Apae profile image71
    Apaeposted 8 years ago

    Thanks, I might just go check that out =]