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    DaniyalAhmadposted 7 years ago

    The day is past, the sun is set,
    And the white stars are in the sky;
    While the long grass with dew is wet,
    And through the air the bats now fly.

    The lambs have now lain down to sleep,
    The birds have long since sought their nests;
    The air is still ; and darks, and deep
    On the hill side the old wood rest.

    Yes, of the dark I have no fear,
    But feel as safe as when it's light;
    For I know God is with me there,
    And He will guard me through the night,

    For God is by when I pray,
    And when I close mine eyes in sleep,
    I know that He will with me stay,
    And will all night watch by me keep,

    For He Who rules the stars and sea,
    Who makes the grass and trees to grow,
    Will look on a poor child like me,
    When on my knees I to Him bow.

    He holds all things in His right hand,
    The rich, the poor, the great, the small;
    When we sleep,or sir, or stand,
    Is with us, for He loves us all...

    Tell me do you like

  2. Drew Breezzy profile image82
    Drew Breezzyposted 7 years ago

    you should post this as a hub

  3. Lady_E profile image83
    Lady_Eposted 7 years ago

    I like - but it would ne nicer in a Hub as Drew stated.

    Did you write it?

  4. Pamda Man profile image60
    Pamda Manposted 7 years ago

    Six quatrain, iambic quadrameter, rhyming couplets, plenty of imagery. Excellent.

    Panda Man

  5. Pamda Man profile image60
    Pamda Manposted 7 years ago

    I write poems too. Maybe I will post them tomorrow. I gotta go now.