New to Hubpage - Feedback on my first hub is appreciated

  1. nick boston profile image61
    nick bostonposted 4 years ago

    I want to improve what I've started here so maybe you can take a look at my first hub and comment to make it more readable.

    1. peeples profile image87
      peeplesposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      The first thing I noticed were spots where it looked like you were missing a word. "I don’t want to sound a hater of love," As an example I believe you are missing the word like in this one. I saw something similar in the next paragraph down. The article is broke down into several sections making it easy to read. I personally didn't care for the title, but that is not relevant because that is just my opinion. You are off to a good start.

      1. nick boston profile image61
        nick bostonposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks for noticing it. It's great to have someone checking on your work to polish things up. Thanks to you.

 
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