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  1. anasshad profile image82
    anasshadposted 4 years ago

    I have started a new hub about gardening in winter. This is my first hub on gardening and want other experienced hubbers to pay critical advice on how I can make this hub better.

    1. Gamerelated profile image83
      Gamerelatedposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Instead of:  When winter rolls arrives, it’s natural to feel a worry about losing your precious flora to the harsh weather and merciless cold, but you should not just sit back and watch the destruction.

      Consider writing:  When winter rolls around, its natural to feel worried about losing your precious flora.  The merciless winter, harsh weather, and frozen soil can be very destructive, but you don't have to sit back and watch.

      Consider reversing the order of these three paragraphs:
      1.  Bring Tender Plants Inside
      2.  Wrap up your pots
      3.  Keep tender plants warm

      Try putting the paragraphs in this order instead:
      1.  Keep tender plants warm
      2.  Wrap up your pots
      3.  Bring tender plants inside

      Your wonderful winter plants paragraph features a list that is formatted in a way that makes the list very narrow and long.  Consider using the table module to organize your list in a way that doesn't leave so much white space in that section.  You could also fill that space with Amazon modules or eBay modules that feature seeds.  This could help you earn more money.  You could also move the Amazon module from the bottom of the page up to where that list is.  Another option might be to add a picture to take up all of that white space. 

      These tips are what I can think of for now.  Please send me a message and let me know if  you think my tips are helpful or not.  Please don't be offended by any of the tips.  I mean everything in a respectful and constructive way.

      1. anasshad profile image82
        anasshadposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you, Gamerelated. I shall definitely work on your instructions. Hoping to develop a good understanding with you. smile

        1. Gamerelated profile image83
          Gamerelatedposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          I am glad to be helpful to you.  I am sure I can learn from you as well.

          1. anasshad profile image82
            anasshadposted 4 years ago in reply to this

            Yes absolutely.

      2. Icematikx profile image60
        Icematikxposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Very nice tips! I benefited alot from it smile

        1. Gamerelated profile image83
          Gamerelatedposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          Hello Icematikx, although these tips were specifically posted in reference to anasshad's Hub you can view his Hub and look at my tips and glean some useful information from it.  I am glad you can benefit from it.

        2. anasshad profile image82
          anasshadposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          Good to know that other people are also being benefited. Nice going Gamerelated.

          1. Gamerelated profile image83
            Gamerelatedposted 4 years ago in reply to this

            No problem, I am happy to be able to help.  Thank your for the kind comments.

 
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