http://bankaiguy.hubpages.com/hub/The-W … ggest-Scam can someone please tell me anything can do too improve the structure of this, and the content. As I am going to start to use this structure on all of my new hubs.
This is a great hub, but I personally wouldn't use the same structure on all of my hubs, since different ones tend to lend themselves to different formats.
I like that you have different modules, and have subtitles. That makes it easier to read. I also like the fact that you added photographs and videos to break up the pace. And you picked a good, interesting topic.
On this one, I would change the following things:
1. Include the name Bernie Madoff in the title. Google uses titles to find your hub, and while the current title is good for a magazine article and piquing our interest, it won't work for online articles.
2. Don't put three videos in a row. There's got to be some writing in between so we remember it is a hub we are reading.
3. Below the video, you don't have any additional interesting things - no photos, no interesting sidenotes, etc. I would add something for visual interest.
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