Brandnew and looking for feedback

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    knowledgeismightposted 4 years ago


    I have posted my first hub at this location: … typography
    and I am looking for feedback.

    Is there anything I can improve (yes, you can always improve but sometimes you are stuck at some point...). And, I am not a native English speaker so, is everything alright with the language or does it sound funny?

    Looking forward to some feedback.

  2. Dame Scribe profile image59
    Dame Scribeposted 4 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages smile I think you've got a good start. I highly recommend writing for people with a gr 8 level of education. Follow that 'keep it simple' rule wink You have body with the text but now need to add photo's, a video, a poll. Just something that will/may prolong the stay of your audience wink I'd also recommend posting 'samples' of those widows and orphans. Over all, a good start!

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      knowledgeismightposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Now I have added some pictures / screenshots from my samples, so people can have a look at a widow and an orphan. And I found a good video on youtube about avoiding those errors in InDesign.

      Thanks for mentioning the obvious thing I have obviously missed ;-)