My first HUB and in dire need of advice and help

  1. needful things profile image78
    needful thingsposted 7 years ago

    Hello Hubbers,

    Good day.

    I've just completed my first Hub. I'd like to ask for some advice and suggestions on how to improve it.  I'd appreciate it if somebody can point me in the the right direction... like what did I do wrong... what can I do to improve it...

    Thanks in advance and a Happy New Year to All


    Needful Things

  2. ProfoundPuns profile image86
    ProfoundPunsposted 7 years ago

    Hi needful! I just read through your Portable eBay Office hub, and I think it looks great. There's a good amount of text, and the text is pertinent and helpful! I have two suggestions for you:

    1. Possibly add some different graphics to break up the text a bit more.
    2. Add some simpler tags that will help people find your hub. Check out the popular topics on HubPages and add the relevant topics as tags to your hub, such as internet, online, and business.

    I'm going to join your fan club! Keep up the good work!

  3. needful things profile image78
    needful thingsposted 7 years ago

    Thanks ProfoundPuns. It sure is quite text heavy. I'll work on your advice as soon as I can. Again thanks and a HAPPY NEW YEAR to you.