Please give feedback to my first hub navaratri festival of india
Content's good, formatting has some problems.
* Bad capitalization throughout. Some words are capitalized when it need not be, while places like Gujrat were not capitalized.
* Is is Navaratri, or Navratri? You spelled it both ways
* Your organization needs improvement. Start with defining what is Navaratri, which Goddess was it honoring, how long it lasts, what was done, and where. THEN go into detail about each aspect. Right now, you discuss WHERE it is observed/celebrated, THEN you explain what are the 9 forms of Goddess Durga, without linking in the concepts of celebrating one form each night of the 9 nights.
* I understand there may not be universal transliteration of all the Indian words. In that case, you should consult Wikipedia for the common spellings (and of course, capitalizations)
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