It doesn't draw you in, it's like reading a list that you've written in a rush. I would have an introduction explaining what the game is about and why you like it etc. You need a conclusion too to round it all off you could have perhaps added a poll asking readers to vote for the games they like. That could perhaps lead to a follow on hub.
You need to read some game reviews and see what sort of things they cover, like playability / interface, historical accuracy, visuals, sounds, mod support, bugginess, subject matter, and personal lean.
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