New Hubber,looking for feedback.Thanks :D

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  1. TechTonic profile image60
    TechTonicposted 11 years ago

    Hey guys,
    I'm new to hubpages and would really appreciate if you could have a look at my Hub and tell me how to improve.I'll be writing reviews mostly,so any advice is extremely welcome.
    Thanks.
    First Hub:http://techtonic.hubpages.com/hub/Sony-Xperia-U-Review

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    1. BraidedZero profile image87
      BraidedZeroposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      In my personal opinion, right off the bat, I would say that the review is kind of short. You might want to add some more information. Maybe include a section where you compare similar items. And the picture at the top, although it's a good picture, is kind of blurry. Unless that's just my horrible vision blurring it... Not a bad first Hub though. Keep up the good work!

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      1. TechTonic profile image60
        TechTonicposted 11 years agoin reply to this

        Oh, okay. I've realized after quite a bit of feedback,that I'm leaving my Hubs a bit too short. I will work on that, as well as the images.
        I really appreciate it, thank you smile

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  2. CASE1WORKER profile image60
    CASE1WORKERposted 11 years ago

    Hi I just had a look at your you tube video hub and must say that it is much too short in my opinion. It's a good start but that's it- most hubbers reckon on writing about a minimum of 100 words- yours is quite a bit less- good luck

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    1. TechTonic profile image60
      TechTonicposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      Yeah, I realised that I've left that one a wee bit too short.
      Thank you! smile

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      1. Kasman profile image76
        Kasmanposted 11 years agoin reply to this

        Hey Tech, I love tech reviews so you're in my cool book right now.  One thing I would recommend is a grammatical issue. Spacing after your periods would a good thing to do. A few of the sentences seem to run together without it. Other than that, everyone else covered the other.

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  3. monisays2u profile image59
    monisays2uposted 11 years ago

    I liked your technique but you must be specific about your own advantages and disadvantages of the mobile. This will help the readers the most.

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  4. TechTonic profile image60
    TechTonicposted 11 years ago

    Thanks you guys, in my future Hubs, I will take note of your advice smile
    Thanks. Do you have any ideas on what I should write about?

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