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How can I improve this hub?

  1. sleepylog profile image89
    sleepylogposted 4 years ago

    This is one of my favourite hubs http://sleepylog.hubpages.com/hub/Rice-omelet but I just can't seem to get it to score higher than 70, it usually sits anywhere between 67 and 70. Any suggestions will be appreciated.

    1. kingkos profile image61
      kingkosposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Dont worry your food was look delicious and the score will go up if many see this promise.

      1. sleepylog profile image89
        sleepylogposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Well it's one of the first hubs I wrote so I would have expected that to happen by now - the score going up I mean. But thanks for your input smile

    2. Millionaire Tips profile image88
      Millionaire Tipsposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Interesting, I hadn't thought of adding rice to eggs.  It's a good hub. Here's what I would do to improve it:

      1.  fix a typo.  "Pinterest in you find it helpful"  I think you mean "if"

      2. Capitalize the first letters of the words in the title - easy, recipe, and omelet.

      3.  Think you need to add oil to be able to fry it

      4..  The hub is pretty short.  As a reader, I am curious about how the addition of rice affects an omelet.  You didn't include how much of the other items to add to the omelet.

      5.  Complete the recipe information: Add a nutrition label and tell how many people it serves and how long it takes to prepare it.

      6.  Consider adding some in-process photos.

      1. AMFredenburg profile image79
        AMFredenburgposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        How does someone go about adding a nutrition label if the nutritional info isn't available? Is there a site on the Internet that helps figure that out?

        Interesting hub!

      2. sleepylog profile image89
        sleepylogposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the great suggestions, I'll definitely use some of them.

      3. sleepylog profile image89
        sleepylogposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Also, I didn't give amounts for the ingredients because it's an adaptable recipe.

  2. freecampingaussie profile image50
    freecampingaussieposted 4 years ago

    I went ,looked ,commented and voted it up . To make it longer add  photos of you grating cheese, beating eggs etc ! Join us on Reccomend Another hubbers hub for more exposure.

    http://s3.hubimg.com/u/5859442_f248.jpg

 
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