Constructive Criticism

  1. LovelyAni profile image59
    LovelyAniposted 4 years ago

    Please take some time to read my poem, and give me some advice, comments or criticism. Thank you in advance. Much appreciated.

    1. writinglover profile image81
      writingloverposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      As the previous hubber stated, you might want to adjust the words on your poem since they overlap the advertisement. You might want to increase the font, because when I first clicked on your hub, I didn't see anything. I nearly assumed that you didn't write anything, but when I scrolled down, I found it. Either increase the font or bring your poem up to the top of the hub (both I would personally recommend). Everything else seems to be just fine! smile Keep up the good work!

  2. LovelyAni profile image59
    LovelyAniposted 4 years ago

    Thank you very much =] !

 
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