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GAME---let's write a story together

  1. MissJamieD profile image77
    MissJamieDposted 4 years ago

    Let's write a story together and see what we come up with.

    You get 10 words or less to continue the story from the previous post.

    Here's the first line...


    As the 1966 Ford Mustang reached the 30 MPH corner..........

    GO!

    1. stanwshura profile image67
      stanwshuraposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      its speed nearing its model year,

  2. Don Fairchild profile image83
    Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago

    That blasted Corvette powered past us, tires smoking and squealing.

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    Beth37posted 4 years ago

    Two muscle cars, one narrow street. The night was young.

  4. bBerean profile image61
    bBereanposted 4 years ago

    Heartbeats undiscernible from the barely muffled reverberation of raw horsepower.

  5. M Zees profile image82
    M Zeesposted 4 years ago

    Adrenaline gushing through our veins, electrifying us, exciting us.

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      Beth37posted 4 years ago in reply to this

      But that had nothing to do with the cars.

      1. M Zees profile image82
        M Zeesposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        not if we turn it into a race...

  6. bBerean profile image61
    bBereanposted 4 years ago

    Two 427s.  His side-oiler was installed specifically to answer the tri-power Corvette.

  7. MissJamieD profile image77
    MissJamieDposted 4 years ago

    Ooooh, the sounds of these motors revving up gets me excited..........

  8. cockadawalk profile image61
    cockadawalkposted 4 years ago

    The End.

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      Beth37posted 4 years ago in reply to this

      lol.. loser.

      1. MissJamieD profile image77
        MissJamieDposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Um...yeah...either have fun with it or go away, right? lol


        next sentence,

        So, Brittany and Bobby hopped from their cars like the Dukes of Hazzard...

        1. bBerean profile image61
          bBereanposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          It had been the buzz of the town and they did not want to miss this race.

          (Perhaps the limit could be one sentence, rather than 10 words?)

          1. MissJamieD profile image77
            MissJamieDposted 4 years ago in reply to this

            Yep, I've been going along with it because it makes sense:)

          2. Don Fairchild profile image83
            Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago in reply to this

            Brittany muses, "I will get revenge for Bobby's new girlfriend stealing Bobby away from me."

            (Wasn't sure if I should be using "reply", so here goes.)

            1. MissJamieD profile image77
              MissJamieDposted 4 years ago in reply to this

              Typically you can use the "post a reply" button at the bottom (if you're not looking to paraphrase). Hope that helps and thanks for playing:)

  9. Don Fairchild profile image83
    Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago

    Brittany muses, "I will get revenge for Bobby's new girlfriend stealing Bobby away from me."

  10. M Zees profile image82
    M Zeesposted 4 years ago

    And that is when the real race began, a race of love and revenge with satisfaction as the ultimate prize.

    1. MissJamieD profile image77
      MissJamieDposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Bobby felt horrible for the hurt he'd caused Brittany but he loved her so

  11. Don Fairchild profile image83
    Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago

    While new girlfriend Jessica fixes her lipstick in the rear view mirror, Brittany challenges Bobby, "Race is on, quarter mile run to dead mans curve, pinks on the line."

    1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
      Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      ...and then off in the distance, they saw the orange lights  -one single bluish beam gleaming and shining down upon the gravel.. a rush of wind and the whirrr... closer, closer...

      1. tedriese profile image61
        tedrieseposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Gripping the wheel his knuckles went white with desire...

        1. mahingepatrick profile image79
          mahingepatrickposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          lol...white with desire---mayebe red?

  12. M Zees profile image82
    M Zeesposted 4 years ago

    She longed to hold him in her arms, but he had hurt her and her pride demanded vengeance.

  13. Don Fairchild profile image83
    Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago

    Brittany seething now, clueless Bobby remarks, "What is the world are those lights all about?"

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      Sarra Garrettposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      As Bobby got closer to the lights he realized they were the lights of a UFO.  "OMG" Bobby thought.  "What do I do now?" as he continued on with speed.

      1. M Zees profile image82
        M Zeesposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        hahahaha what  a way to twist the story nice one ^

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          Sarra Garrettposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          smile

      2. Don Fairchild profile image83
        Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Brittany screams, "It has a tractor beam, watch out, watch out!"  Jessica giggles, "WOW look at the lights."

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          Sarra Garrettposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          Jessica and Brittany could do nothing but stare in disbelief as Bobbys' car catches the tractor beam.  Up he went into the space ship disappearing from sight.  The other car stops just in the nick of time before he too is caught up in the light. 

          Bobby opens his eyes and sees....

          1. bBerean profile image61
            bBereanposted 4 years ago in reply to this

            ...an alien, wearing a Corvette jacket.  They had captured the wrong car.

  14. paradigmsearch profile image89
    paradigmsearchposted 4 years ago

    But that was OK, because everything was blue thread, blue thread, blue thread...

  15. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
    Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago

    Steve McQueen walked up at that point and demanded to know what was goin' on.

    1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
      Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      The alien pointed some sort of a lazer gun at Steve with its two strange, wart covered hands...

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        Sarra Garrettposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        however, the laser didn't work.  The alien had a wierd shocked look to his face and looked at his laser gun.  In the mean time, Steve and Bobby took off running.

  16. M Zees profile image82
    M Zeesposted 4 years ago

    Meanwhile Brittany took out the rocket launcher she always kept in her car trunk and aimed it at the UFO thinking that she could kill Bobby and destroy the aliens together and become the hero who saved planet earth.

    1. Don Fairchild profile image83
      Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      While Brittany took aim, the alien in the Corvette jacket caught her eye.  The alien using telepathy asked her, "Is that really a 1954 vette?"  She was flattered by the exchange.

      1. MissJamieD profile image77
        MissJamieDposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Brittany did not realize she was being sidetracked by the aliens and all of a sudden she saw and felt an explosion and was blinded.

        1. bBerean profile image61
          bBereanposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          Knocked to the ground, she sat silently as coherent thought eluded her.  Ringing in her ears was accompanied by the refrain from an obscure Manfred Mann song her mother used to sing on neighborhood karaoke nights.

          1. MissJamieD profile image77
            MissJamieDposted 4 years ago in reply to this

            Brittany's mother called, "Brittany, stop singing like a dying cow, your boyfriend Bobby is on the phone."

            1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
              Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

              Brittany was suddenly reminded of the telepathtic exchange with the alien...
              she had to find out more. She called out:  "Tell him I'll call him back later, ( much later,")  she thought...

  17. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
    Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago

    "He had alien eyes, big and round,
    Blinking lights above the ground.
    Flying high, here then gone...
    Away from her,
    for oh too long..".
    She scribbled out a poem on a scrap of paper she found in her purse...

    1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
      Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      "Yes, it is a 54 'Vette," she tried to send a telepathic message back to the alien wearing the Corvette jacket...

      1. MissJamieD profile image77
        MissJamieDposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        The alien, with his big, round eyes, looked at her lovingly. He secretly wanted her for his own.

  18. Don Fairchild profile image83
    Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago

    The alien's eyes grew wider with a deep blue florescence glowing deeply.  The alien then started humming the notes to "Love me Tender", then put the poem to the tune.  All three women started to sway uncontrollably.  Steve McQueen yelled, "Stop him, they are being hypnotized."

  19. directorslounge profile image60
    directorsloungeposted 4 years ago

    Steve's eyes stared into the alien's wide-eyed glare as if he was being pulled in by its piercing gaze.  "That song! Why is it singing that song?"  Steve's mouth opened slightly.  "No way, it can't be.  It's not possible!"  Steve McQueen stood frozen in disbelief of what he just saw with his own wide-eyes.

    1. MissJamieD profile image77
      MissJamieDposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      It was Wayne and Garth!

  20. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
    Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago

    "We came to view the 2054 Corvette!" called Wayne and Garth " Much respect and reverence to you Alien Wonders! Asteroid Ceres led us to you and the 2054 'vette! "

  21. M Zees profile image82
    M Zeesposted 4 years ago

    The Alien raised one of his white eye brows cresting a square shaped pink colored eye on his big round ball shaped head and simply raised his eight fingered hands towards the duo.

    1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
      Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Confused by the strange and obviously inferior natures of these two humanoids, the aliens looked sternly at them and spoke:  "You can come on board to observe our model from the future, if you can find two others to bring along who are more qualified specimens,
      ah hem.... individuals."

  22. Don Fairchild profile image83
    Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago

    Steve snapped out of his confusion with sudden clarity.  He screamed "No, NO, don't listen to them they are trying to steal the 100th anniversary Corvette and they are coercing able mechanics to go back to their planet to maintain their collection of Corvettes!"  He pleaded, "Don't you remember the movie about 'How to serve mankind', it was a cookbook."

    1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
      Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Well, they won't eat them.... they'll make slaves out of them!  (Right?)

  23. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
    Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago

    Comprehending Steve's wisdom regarding the matter, Wayne and Garth went scurrying away escaping the strangely hypnotic lure of the pale aliens who posessed all sorts of peculiar and creepy features...

  24. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
    Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago

    But, Brittany had been watching, while all this took place. As the SNL characters exited stage right, Brittany ran into the light... she called out, "Wait Good Sirs! May I see the anniversary model?

  25. Don Fairchild profile image83
    Don Fairchildposted 4 years ago

    Steve scratched his head in confusion, he just experienced a senior moment. At least that's what he thought, maybe they had mind control working...Hummm.

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      squeeknomoreposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Brittany decided she could acquire that 100th anniversary model. She knew  could, if only...

      1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
        Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        if only she could get the alien to let her in the ship.

        1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
          Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

          Brittany walked quickly to the spacecraft where the aliens were getting ready to board.  But suddenly, she was swept up into the craft along with the two aliens... through some sort of magnetic force.

          1. LeslieAdrienne profile image83
            LeslieAdrienneposted 4 years ago in reply to this

            No longer concerned for her personal health or safety, she closed her eyes deciding internally that whatever the cost she would be the first human,(besides Steve McQueen), to see and handle the 2054 ice blue corvette.

          2. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
            Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

            The door locked shut with a jolt and the spacecraft blasted straight upward. Brittany looked sheepishly at the aliens... "Sorry guys, can you bring me back?"

            1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
              Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

              "Well, we wanted more than one, but one will do...for now. We'll go back...in time."  She would never forget the laughter that followed... their high pitched giggles and inward/ outward breaths escaping from creepy toothless grins. She was too scared to even cry, yet somehow, she still remained determined...

              1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
                Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

                Suddenly something caught her attention... a figure in the corner in the dark.... The aliens left the room through star trek like doors. She stared at the figure who emerged as soon as the aliens glided out of the room...
                It was Steve!

                1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
                  Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

                  He held up a finger to his lips and said, "shhh..." But, she burst out " What? We cannot keep you a secret!"  And then, in burst the Alien Captain.  I see we actually have two specimens...I mean individuals!

                  1. Kathryn L Hill profile image85
                    Kathryn L Hillposted 4 years ago in reply to this

                    "Where are we going?" Asked Steve.
                    Brittany couldn't believe they were stuck on an alien spacecraft going who knows where.  And who were these strange looking beings who could somehow communicate with them... in English?

                    The Alien Captain answered Steve,  "Altair."

  26. LauraD093 profile image84
    LauraD093posted 4 years ago

    Was just the beginning of their adventure... (sorry I couldn't resist) Great idea ...thanks for a fun (for a change) forum post:)

 
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