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  1. plerza profile image61
    plerzaposted 3 years ago

    Hey all,

    I wrote this preface in high school & have recently edited it. If you have a moment, please read it and message me your constructive criticism. I have no formal writing education, so any tips & such would be great, as well as any form of criticism regarding my writing style - as I plan to put this book together by the end of the summer. Thanks a bunch in advance, this is the link

  2. Simone Smith profile image92
    Simone Smithposted 3 years ago

    Hi plerza!

    I'm delighted to see you re-working academic work you've already created. Should you like to audit your own work, consider using these Learning Center guides as a reference:
    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/how- … into-a-hub
    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/Elem … tellar-Hub

    Hope that helps!

  3. plerza profile image61
    plerzaposted 3 years ago

    Thank you Simone!