Stellar Hub - perhaps?

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    pot-pourriposted 3 years ago

    This is an unsuccessful hub that I unpublished from another HP account and totally rewrote and r-imagined for this HP account. It's an attempt at creating a Stellar Hub.

    Did I do good? What else can I do to make it better? … ction-DVDs

    1. agilitymach profile image100
      agilitymachposted 3 years ago in reply to this

      I felt sorry that no one had responded, so I went to read your hub.  I have to say I REALLY liked it (and I think I'm tough to please)!!  The videos included were fun.  I watched quite a bit of the Star Trek one.  Your polls kept me interested.  It was very engaging, and I spent far more time there than I had expected.

      I am a bit of a geek, so I enjoyed the visit.  My only advice would be to edit your hub with new eyes.  There are some clunky sentences that need to be fixed for easier readability.  I find these in my own work, especially after letting the hub sit for a few weeks.  I usually fix them by making two sentences that flow out of the clunky sentence.  That's all I can really point a finger at. smile

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    pot-pourriposted 3 years ago

    Thanks for the help! It's been pretty under-whelming!!! big_smile