emotions being stored in the hips

  1. Kachina Autumn profile image86
    Kachina Autumnposted 2 years ago

    Hi guys, like Apooch, I've just posted my first article and would super appreciate a lil feedback. http://kachinaautumn.hubpages.com/hub/H … -your-hips Does this engage your attention? What about the tone of the article, too formal/boring? Constructive critique very welcome smile

    1. Marie Flint profile image89
      Marie Flintposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      Kachina, I don't know that the forum is the best place to post your request, even though this section of Hub Pages is intended to address that function. Have you posted your request on any social site, such as Facebook?

      I'll give it a look, but I have been reprimanded by another hubber not to critique others' writing, in spite of my skills. (Her criteria implied that I should have 10,000 page views before attempting such an endeavor. Life experience didn't seem important to her.) --Blessings!