1. Never trust the opinion of friends, they are never going to say anything negative about your work.
2. Bear in mind that many people will say a piece of artwork, poetry or performance is "genius" merely because they don't understand it, and they're afraid that could mean it's brilliant and they're stupid. Even though the reverse is more like the truth.
HOW about this one Melissa? ill be fine with intellectual Cold Bright tunnel then POP, abyss or mountain view ahead. Who knows, when forward and behind are yellow lights. Old sayings but untold stories are the ones that turn it red, dead. I'm laying here spoiling myself thinking a spares in the trunk but fight.
It was British racing green, like the Spanish fucking flu, meant to be. I could give a shit less. Worn out or police spikes, anything in between. I’m an artificial robot building myself up, strong rooted tree. Tank pumps hate from this half hope, complete demise.
Hell is right here, that halfway point in the race to lead. I used to, it was great, that neosporin breeze outrunning shame. I've galloped and sang, I've triumphed, but for more I plead. Just waiting to take my claim.
Comedy bit, maybe....definitely a work of G. Practice your English and lines like 'girls like small things like babies and big things like d*cks' might be found offensive by some. You might want to excise that one and other similar lines. Just sayin' as they say.
He might also want to remember that the stage directions in a screenplay really aren't meant for artistic endeavors. That is, of course, unless his artistic endeavor involves having to have his screenplay surgically removed from whatever convenient orifice an actor/director/set designer chooses to place it in.
I've noticed working with other writers, especially poets, that there is an occasional tendency to overestimate one's talent. Not saying you don't have talent, I'm saying that it's not really genius level. The fishing for complements thing never works out well either. What you are essentially doing is saying "Tell me I'm a genius or I'm going to get defensive."
1 nor is used incorrectly 2 i did, my father actually wrote THE book on alternative medicine, and he doesnt believe it himself 3 i didnt ask for critiques i asked for input 4 im open to critiques 5 Ive already been called a genius 6 I dont have friends 7 you are ugly inside and out
If you can't be bothered to spell-check and capitalize your comments, I cant be bothered reading your articles. Genius? Huh!
How dare you say writers are uninspiring, when some of the best writers on this site have responded to you? We could assume you are referring to them. You can't see outside your own ego that others might be more capable than you.
I suspect you are what might be termed in the UK, "care in the community". Good luck!
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