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I'd like feedback on my Hub: All about Walkie-Talkies

  1. Shehabzaza profile image60
    Shehabzazaposted 24 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub All about Walkie-Talkies. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Stacie L profile image88
      Stacie Lposted 24 months ago in reply to this

      After a scan of your Hub, I can tell you that your first introductory paragraph is one long run-on sentence. Please break it up into smaller ones.
      Second, the use of the term"walkie-talkie" is mentioned too much.
      Take the photo credit off as well.
      How about some photos, videos and maybe a poll?
      That's all I'll suggest; maybe some others can chime in.

  2. Shehabzaza profile image60
    Shehabzazaposted 24 months ago

    Thank you so much, that was a great help.

  3. Thish profile image82
    Thishposted 24 months ago

    I just had a quick read on your hub.
    - Use bullet points given in the text capsule for your point form texts than using the keyboard *infront of each point
    - Also this hub clearly needs atleast 2 more photos.
    -The way you have given the photo credit seems incorrect seems as a search result URL in google search. There is a help guide in hubpages pn how to credit the photos.
    hope this helps.

  4. Shehabzaza profile image60
    Shehabzazaposted 24 months ago

    Yes you actually did help thank you.

 
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