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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Top 6 Most Famous Super-Rich People For Forex Busi

  1. soesilo profile image61
    soesiloposted 23 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Top 6  Most Famous Super-Rich People For Forex Business and Futures Product in History (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. sallybea profile image96
      sallybeaposted 23 months ago in reply to this

      Try writing your hubs in a program such as Word and do a  spell and grammar check before publishing your hubs..  I understand that English may not be your first language but there are far too many basic errors in your writing.

      1. soesilo profile image61
        soesiloposted 23 months ago in reply to this

        thanks for your help. nice to see u smile

  2. SmartAndFun profile image90
    SmartAndFunposted 23 months ago

    PAGING TIMETRAVELER2. PAGING TIMETRAVELER2. YOUR ASSISTANCE IS REQUIRED.

    1. soesilo profile image61
      soesiloposted 23 months ago in reply to this

      i am novice in hub. so i do not understand what is  PAGING TIMETRAVELER2 please specify that to make me understand tahnks

      1. SmartAndFun profile image90
        SmartAndFunposted 23 months ago in reply to this

        I'm sorry, soesilo. I was making a joke, and it wasn't even a funny one. It had nothing to do with you or your article. That was not fair to you.

        I took a quick glance at your article, and I while it is very thorough and full of information, I think the problem most certainly is it is written in broken English.

        English fluency is required here at HubPages. Do you have a friend or relative who could read over your work and help you fix the English usage problems?

        1. soesilo profile image61
          soesiloposted 23 months ago in reply to this

          Thanks SmartAndFun, now i understand. my problem here is about english usage. i will fix it soon. thanks  SmartAndFun for your feed to me. very helpful smile

    2. calculus-geometry profile image86
      calculus-geometryposted 23 months ago in reply to this

      LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

      1. SmartAndFun profile image90
        SmartAndFunposted 23 months ago in reply to this

        You always make me laugh, C-G. Glad to return the favor. big_smile

  3. Suzanne Day profile image97
    Suzanne Dayposted 23 months ago

    Sed-me might be able to help...

    1. soesilo profile image61
      soesiloposted 23 months ago in reply to this

      do you mean send ?

      1. Suzanne Day profile image97
        Suzanne Dayposted 23 months ago in reply to this

        No, there's a hubber called Sed-me who may be able to help you.

        1. sallybea profile image96
          sallybeaposted 23 months ago in reply to this

          smile

        2. soesilo profile image61
          soesiloposted 23 months ago in reply to this

          thanks Suzanne Day nice to see u smile

  4. calculus-geometry profile image86
    calculus-geometryposted 23 months ago

    Hi soesilo,

    I skimmed your hub and it's well-organized with a lot of good information, but you have many small errors in English usage throughout. Do you have MS Word or a spelling and grammer checking program? I think if you run it through two different grammar checkers you can fix about half of the mistakes.  To polish it more, have a friend who speaks English read it out loud to catch the more subtle usage errors. 

    http://www.grammarly.com/

    1. soesilo profile image61
      soesiloposted 23 months ago in reply to this

      thank you very much. I will follow your advice I will fix it as soon as possible.  my english very bad because i am Indonesian nice to see u all smile

 
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