jump to last post 1-3 of 3 discussions (6 posts)

Not Featured Quaulity

  1. Raymond Eagar profile image70
    Raymond Eagarposted 2 years ago

    One of my hubs from Sqido became not featured quality for three months then became featured again, what could have been the reason?. http://raymondeagar.hubpages.com/hub/flying6

    1. Susana S profile image91
      Susana Sposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      My first thoughts:

      - the first paragraph needs to address what the title promises.

      - too much "I" stuff. Most readers won't be interested in you and your experiences, they want to know what's involved in getting a pilots license.

      - too many products - some of which are unrelated.

      Hope that helps smile

    2. Writer Fox profile image78
      Writer Foxposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      Your Hub is featured now, so I guess it doesn't have a problem!

  2. Shades-of-truth profile image87
    Shades-of-truthposted 2 years ago

    In addition to what Susana S said, Raymond, there are quite a few typographical errors. If you would like to send me an email, I will point them out to you.

    Often, it is difficult to see our own typos, and many of us are glad to help others with editing. It may take me a day or so to get the edited text to you, due to my schedule, but I believe it would help your hub.

    1. Raymond Eagar profile image70
      Raymond Eagarposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks Shades of Truth, We all need help sometime.

  3. Raymond Eagar profile image70
    Raymond Eagarposted 2 years ago

    Thanks for the comment I will try to rewrite my I's.

 
working