Please shoot your constructive criticism of my First Hub

  1. desinet1 profile image60
    desinet1posted 7 years ago

    I am new to Hubpages and created my first Hub around 6 months back and forgot. Today I returned to hubpages and found that it has been assigned a decent hubscore of 66.
    I would like to improve upon that.
    Could you please shoot your criticism about the hubpage and let me know how can I improve my future hubpages.
    The direct link to the hubpage in question is

    1. cfangerow profile image62
      cfangerowposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I'm surprised you haven't gotten any replies on your request after four days! Where is everyone?

      t's a really good subject and your information is helpful. You gave me some good ideas.

      I notice that you have a lot of links back to digg. Are any of these affiliate related? I'm no expert on the subject of affiliate links but it seems to me that you have a good opportunity in that article to place some discreet affiliate links. Have you looked into that?

  2. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 7 years ago

    I gave a thumbs up wink shhh...