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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Positive and Negative Aspects of the Different Busi

  1. holmlawgroup profile image60
    holmlawgroupposted 19 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Positive and Negative Aspects of the Different Business Entity Types (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. relache profile image87
    relacheposted 19 months ago

    What feedback did you get from the QAP process?

  3. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 19 months ago

    It seems t me that the hub is really to promote Holm law group.  Maybe if you added some other helpful links it would make the hub seem more useful in its own right.

  4. Millionaire Tips profile image90
    Millionaire Tipsposted 19 months ago

    I'm not sure why this one wouldn't pass the QAP, but it may have hit the over-promotional filter.  Your user name already points to the fact that you are trying to promote a particular business.  In the hub, the last sentence of the "sole proprietorship" tells the reader to consult an account. The last sentence of the next section tells the reader to consult a business lawyer.   If you take those two sentences out, you may keep it from sounding too much like an advertisement.  At the end, you also tell people to consult a lawyer, and provide a link, so readers will know what to do.

    You may want to consider adding a table that summarizes the pros and cons of the different entity types.

  5. colorfulone profile image87
    colorfuloneposted 19 months ago

    After reading Millionaire Tips about your hub, I think it might be best to post your content on a business blog that you will have complete control over.  Then, you do not have to jump through hoops of getting published on HubPages.

  6. holmlawgroup profile image60
    holmlawgroupposted 19 months ago

    Great feedback everyone. I'll try to add some more helpful facts or graphics, and decrease references to our specific services. Thanks again.