I'd like feedback on my Hub: Complicated Diabetes,Simple Explanation

  1. Drwahid Pirzada profile image65
    Drwahid Pirzadaposted 19 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Complicated Diabetes,Simple Explanation. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Shades-of-truth profile image86
    Shades-of-truthposted 18 months ago

    For starters, Drwahid, the Hub is replete with grammatical errors. Even in the title, you are missing a space after "Diabetes," and "Simple". In the first capsule, there is a large white blank space after "foods like" and "bread". The list of foods you have, where "bread" is, does not have spaces after the commas, before you typed the next word.

    There are many more errors, which make the Hub difficult to read properly in English. I would be glad to help with the grammar, if you would like. Simply go to my profile page, and click on Fan Mail, and there is a link where you can send me an email.

    I do that a lot, for Hubbers, and used to do it on Squidoo, too. I can't always get to all of it in a day, as I run two retail businesses, but would be glad to help.

    1. Drwahid Pirzada profile image65
      Drwahid Pirzadaposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      thanks for the help.