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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Achieve Happiness With God

  1. Decow Amazon profile image59
    Decow Amazonposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub
    http://decowamazon.hubpages.com/hub/sec … f-casanova
    (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    calculus-geometryposted 2 years ago

    um...here is the fixed link for any hubbers who want to tackle this one...
    warning: this hub may cause you to spit your drink all over your keyboard. proceed with caution

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    calculus-geometryposted 2 years ago

    Hi Decow, welcome to HubPages!  The structure of your hub is currently as follows:

    * quote from a religious text
    * picture of a volcano
    * vague instructions for making fried rice
    * music video on youtube
    * link to a spam blog
    * product link for baby wipes on amazon
    * product link for a cook book on amazon

    To improve this hub I would suggest adding 5-6 pictures of zebras.  A map of all the Taco Bell locations in Topeka would also be very  helpful to the reader.  To improve engagement, you could include a quiz on famous Irish ping pong players, and a poll asking readers whether they prefer shag carpet or earwigs.  Best of luck!

    1. wilderness profile image95
      wildernessposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      I'm not sure - while fried rice will surely get you closer to God, and volcanoes have been known to do that, too, Taco Bell seems a real stretch here.  Far better to show McD's or even BK.

      I also suspect that "Secret Loves of Casanova" was a better title
      http://hubpages.com/forum/topic/129485

  4. Decow Amazon profile image59
    Decow Amazonposted 2 years ago

    hallo
    i apologize
    I was a beginner and I will review it
    ok thanks for the instructions
    best regards
    decow

  5. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 2 years ago

    Your hub needs to be about a single coherent subject.

    1. Decow Amazon profile image59
      Decow Amazonposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      thank u psycheskinner

 
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