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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Achieve Happiness With God

  1. Decow Amazon profile image60
    Decow Amazonposted 22 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub
    http://decowamazon.hubpages.com/hub/sec … f-casanova
    (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. calculus-geometry profile image86
    calculus-geometryposted 22 months ago

    um...here is the fixed link for any hubbers who want to tackle this one...
    warning: this hub may cause you to spit your drink all over your keyboard. proceed with caution

  3. calculus-geometry profile image86
    calculus-geometryposted 22 months ago

    Hi Decow, welcome to HubPages!  The structure of your hub is currently as follows:

    * quote from a religious text
    * picture of a volcano
    * vague instructions for making fried rice
    * music video on youtube
    * link to a spam blog
    * product link for baby wipes on amazon
    * product link for a cook book on amazon

    To improve this hub I would suggest adding 5-6 pictures of zebras.  A map of all the Taco Bell locations in Topeka would also be very  helpful to the reader.  To improve engagement, you could include a quiz on famous Irish ping pong players, and a poll asking readers whether they prefer shag carpet or earwigs.  Best of luck!

    1. wilderness profile image96
      wildernessposted 22 months ago in reply to this

      I'm not sure - while fried rice will surely get you closer to God, and volcanoes have been known to do that, too, Taco Bell seems a real stretch here.  Far better to show McD's or even BK.

      I also suspect that "Secret Loves of Casanova" was a better title
      http://hubpages.com/forum/topic/129485

  4. Decow Amazon profile image60
    Decow Amazonposted 22 months ago

    hallo
    i apologize
    I was a beginner and I will review it
    ok thanks for the instructions
    best regards
    decow

  5. psycheskinner profile image82
    psycheskinnerposted 22 months ago

    Your hub needs to be about a single coherent subject.

    1. Decow Amazon profile image60
      Decow Amazonposted 22 months ago in reply to this

      thank u psycheskinner

 
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