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I'd like feedback on my Hub: How to Become a Krav Maga Instructor

  1. KelinaCowell profile image60
    KelinaCowellposted 22 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How to Become a Krav Maga Instructor (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. wordswithlove profile image79
      wordswithloveposted 22 months ago in reply to this

      Hello Kelina, a few changes might help you, Firstly, the intro. To hook the reader, this must be formulated differently. Perhaps you could begin by explaining what Krav Maga is and who might be interested in it. Secondly, you could break your hub into more "chewable" pieces, instead of large chunks. Use a "how to" tone rather than how not to, or what to avoid, in the subtitles.
      Don't worry, I am sure you can reconstruct this so it is much more reader-friendly, just by tweaking a few things. Also, pay close attention to all of the spelling! Somewhere at the beginning, you have written "! order to....." I am sure you meant "In order to.."
      Hope this helps. smile
      Wordswithlove

  2. KelinaCowell profile image60
    KelinaCowellposted 22 months ago

    Hi, thanks for your feedback smile Is this better now?

    1. wordswithlove profile image79
      wordswithloveposted 22 months ago in reply to this

      Yes, Kelina! It looks and reads so much better! Good job. smile

      1. KelinaCowell profile image60
        KelinaCowellposted 22 months ago in reply to this

        Great, thank you for your help. Hopefully this will be good enough for publishing now!

        1. wordswithlove profile image79
          wordswithloveposted 22 months ago in reply to this

          You are welcome. Good Luck. I shall look out for it. smile

 
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