I'd like feedback on my Hub: Seven Candidates - Part One - The First Two

  1. HillarySusan profile image61
    HillarySusanposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Seven Candidates - Part One - The First Two (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!\

    They said it contained "spammy elements, but I don't see that.  Thansk!!

  2. Nicole Grizzle profile image93
    Nicole Grizzleposted 2 years ago

    I personally don't really see any spammy elements. But, the hub itself could stand to have more organization. You could divide your hub into more sections. For example, each candidate gets two sections: How You Met the Candidate, and Your Impressions, for a total of four sections. Use multiple text capsules to get the "header" effect. It makes the hub look much better.
    Also, inject those pictures throughout the text, not all at the bottom! This helps keep people's interest.
    Occasionally, your sentences run a bit long, which might need some editing. But, your writing doesn't seem to be a big problem in general. You aren't keyword stuffing, and you aren't promoting anything. I don't know.
    Anyway, good luck on trying to get your hub published!

  3. HillarySusan profile image61
    HillarySusanposted 2 years ago

    Thank you Nicole!

 
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