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I'd like feedback on my Hub: How To Prepare For A Festival

  1. Buck Remington profile image85
    Buck Remingtonposted 23 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How To Prepare For A Festival. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. galleryofgrace profile image80
      galleryofgraceposted 23 months ago in reply to this

      Best to start with fixing the typos, errors and run on sentences. Maybe break up the paragraphs a little too.

    2. chuckandus6 profile image51
      chuckandus6posted 23 months ago in reply to this

      I think that if you put the pictures,or some over to the right maybe added a little bit more colorful photos. The quiz is a hit or miss a lot of people use their phones and sometimes not compatible. Maybe add a video about topic? I would also try to break up text into multiple capsules so you can put pictures in between.
      This is just my opinion,don't know if it will help.

  2. Buck Remington profile image85
    Buck Remingtonposted 23 months ago

    Thank you very much, I'll re-edit and try and find some more exciting festival pictures something a little less cliché.

  3. Buck Remington profile image85
    Buck Remingtonposted 23 months ago

    So I took out the quizzes and replaced them with videos. The first one is half humor and half a virtual tour and the second one is just a review of the different kinds of festivals that exist.

 
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