I'd like feedback on my Hub: South Florida - The Beauty Hub For Weddings and Hon

  1. jockbrocas profile image63
    jockbrocasposted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub South Florida - The Beauty Hub For Weddings and Honey Mooners. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    One of the things to note is that any links within the article have nothing to do with me, they are places and professionals within that industry.

    1. wilderness profile image93
      wildernessposted 20 months ago in reply to this

      The hub is not published - no one but you can see it.

      I'd start with the title, though - a "honey moon" is an amber or gold colored moon, not a post-nuptial vacation.

 
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