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Please someone read my Hubs and give a feedback.

  1. SouradipSinha profile image83
    SouradipSinhaposted 20 months ago

    I have published 11 Hubs so far. Please someone read the following Hubs and advice me what i need to do to improve my writing style or whatever that is required.

    Here are the links of 5 Hubs i shortlisted -

    http://souradipsinha.hubpages.com/hub/T … win-Rommel

    http://souradipsinha.hubpages.com/hub/T … ian-Threat

    http://souradipsinha.hubpages.com/hub/C … -Mushrooms

    http://souradipsinha.hubpages.com/hub/T … rld-War-II

    http://souradipsinha.hubpages.com/hub/A … Telescopes

    Please give a feedback. Thanks.

    1. Millionaire Tips profile image86
      Millionaire Tipsposted 20 months ago in reply to this

      I took a look at your telescope hub, and was very impressed. Wow - such high quality images and good solid writing. Great compilation of information.

      But as I looked further, I realized that you had probably used these images illegally, based on your citations.  It looks like you are getting copyrighted images from websites.

      Your second paragraph belongs after the different types of telescopes are explained.

      Then I Googled a sentence from your hub, and it appears that it is straight out of Wikipedia.

      The best hubs are where you use your own words based on your own knowledge.

      1. Millionaire Tips profile image86
        Millionaire Tipsposted 20 months ago in reply to this

        Oh, I forgot to say that the title of your hub says something about a student project. There are no projects in your hub, so it is false advertising.

      2. SouradipSinha profile image83
        SouradipSinhaposted 20 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the reply.

        I had this school project saved for the last 3 years in my computer. I had taken the writings from the net and had edited as best i could back then. I did not edit much before putting it to the HubPages.

        I have unpublished it and will keep your advice in mind. Thanks.

 
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