I'd like feedback on my Hub: India's Political Shift

  1. Robin Chauhan profile image60
    Robin Chauhanposted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub India's Political Shift (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. SouradipSinha profile image84
      SouradipSinhaposted 16 months ago in reply to this

      You see, its very Indian.. the terms like AAP..BJP..the slogan "5 sal kejriwal" and its similarity with bjp's slogan (agli bar modi sarkar), which has a sarcastic humor in it but no one except we Indians will understand these political things and abbreviations unless you explain in detail.
      Another thing, the title says "India's Political Shift" and the Hub is about a little  conversation. You may change either the title or the content. Happy to help. smile

  2. lions44 profile image93
    lions44posted 16 months ago

    In terms of readability, you need more background on Indian politics.  What's CM?  Maybe give a very brief bio of the politicians involved, etc.  Interesting subject matter, but more detail.  Good luck.