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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Louvre Doors and how they are made

  1. Aladdins Cave profile image82
    Aladdins Caveposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I have redone this pages 4 times this month, and can not figure out why its being knocked back
    by Admin. / COMPUTERS smile

    PLEASE

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Louvre Doors and how they are made. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. AliciaC profile image97
      AliciaCposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      Hi, Aladdins Cave. Your hub starts out well but then becomes confusing. You describe Louvre doors and then discuss your book about your road trip from Australia to Germany. Then you alternate between the topics of Louvre doors and your book again. The book seems to have nothing to do with the title of your hub.

      In your hub, you say that the main reason that you're writing at HubPages is because of your book. This reinforces the idea that your hub is meant to be promotional, as does your offer to send books to readers without a mail charge. The two ads for your book have the same effect.

      I think that to get the hub featured you're going to have to remove all the references to the book and stick to how Louvre doors are made. The hub could be a good informational article if you expand the sections about doors and proofread them. You should probably change the reference to "lens" in the first sentence, though. Good luck.

      1. Aladdins Cave profile image82
        Aladdins Caveposted 2 years ago in reply to this

        I'm on it, right now.
        Get back to you.
        Ta

      2. Aladdins Cave profile image82
        Aladdins Caveposted 2 years ago in reply to this

        Hi AliciaC,
        I have deleted 98% of everything that had to do with my book.
        The only thing I left was the Amazon capsule which I added 2 weeks.
        I REALLY REALLY appreciate your in put.
        Thank you and Cheers from DOWNUNDER

 
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