I'd like feedback on my Hub: Dad you keep visiting me in my dreams, you are my s

  1. GodsPoetNkosi profile image1
    GodsPoetNkosiposted 21 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Dad you keep visiting me in my dreams, you are my shadow.. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    Hubbers Anybody who knows somebody, that can help

    Me get a hold of Eminem Co Founder
    Of Acid Rap Music the Rap God...

    Shady records makes music that makes you wanna fight and not go quietly into the night. "John Milton"
    English Poet.

    Given a platform

    I would love to make Angel Music...

    Where women from all walks of life are glorified.

    And we cherish and worship life.

    Gods Poet Nkosi

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    May your Angels guide you in all that you desire
    And with time materialize.

    Peace.

    1. peachpurple profile image78
      peachpurpleposted 21 months ago in reply to this

      i had read your first poem, not related to your title , only the second part is related but the word dad and dream are not input that much

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      GodsPoetNkosiposted 21 months ago in reply to this

      Peach Purple

      How the first part is related to my Dad.

      I come from the union and love between my mother and father.

      So the leopard is my supposed bride, my soul mate.

      Just as my Dad found Grace and True LOVE.

      The leopard is my Heaven on Earth.

      And the Beauty of it she would not need to change

      Her surname, Even should we be with blessed with our

      first daughter, "Swahilli"

      Swahilli being my Childhood Hero Tupac his favourite

      African Language Swahilli

 
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