I'd like feedback on my Hub: Best Colored Stones Jewellers in India

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    bridal-jewelleryposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Best Colored Stones Jewellers in India (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. galleryofgrace profile image81
      galleryofgraceposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      Add more photos.
      Increase words by about 1000.
      Use American English.
      Remove line ' read more " at end.

    2. theraggededge profile image92
      theraggededgeposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      Are women really 'craving' stone jewelry? I'm not, I'd rather have a nice slice of toast.

      Your hub is too thin, i.e. not enough content. You need good quality copyright-free images and it would make sense to have someone to proof-read your writing.

      The bit at the end kind of detracts from the article - no-one wants to feel as though they are being 'squeezed' towards another business. You could have written a straightforward, interesting article about your business - its history, how you run it, what you sell, include great photos, etc. - without being overly promotional.