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Opinions? on my poem

  1. frankcofrah profile image43
    frankcofrahposted 18 months ago

    I can't see your poem, i think it would have been better if you shared the title or the link.
    Caution, i don't know if it against rules.

  2. Brandon Bledsoe profile image55
    Brandon Bledsoeposted 18 months ago

    One is called, I,too am American
    The other one is called Love, What Is LOVE?

    1. xInspiredx profile image61
      xInspiredxposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      Sorry I can't seem to find your poems.

      1. Brandon Bledsoe profile image55
        Brandon Bledsoeposted 18 months ago in reply to this

        Just click my name and its going to take you to my profile

  3. xInspiredx profile image61
    xInspiredxposted 18 months ago

    I have been on your profile everything is there but your 2 poems. I'll  try back later to see if they are there.

    1. Brandon Bledsoe profile image55
      Brandon Bledsoeposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      ill email you the link what's your email

      1. Pearldiver profile image88
        Pearldiverposted 18 months ago in reply to this

        That's a Great and Extremely DUMB suggestion roll
        - Why not post it here and open yourself up to EVERY Spammer in the world !!!

        If you want to PM someone:
        - You go to their profile page - Click on Fan Mail - and Look... it says???

        It's there for this exact reason and uses HP effectively as a filter that allows the recipient to maintain anonymity of their email address and the opportunity to decide whether or not the message appears to be a Phishing attempt...

        @OP - It takes time to go through the quality process when initially posting hubs. Your work will appear on your page on passing that process. In the interim, if your love for poetry is to be seen by others you would want to read your work... then Take the Time to Build Your Bio... with a good avatar image and an introduction to your readers on Who you are, along with Why they should read you. In that way, you are shown to be serious in your role as a writer, making your poetry a secondary statement to your Quality as a Writer/Poet.
        Hint : - It takes only a fraction of a second for a reader to decide (from what they see) on whether you, and/or your work are worth reading! - Cruel but True fact of life.
        PD

  4. xInspiredx profile image61
    xInspiredxposted 18 months ago

    I'll google search the titles. You should have them on your profile page easier accessibly.

  5. xInspiredx profile image61
    xInspiredxposted 18 months ago

    I did read your poem titled love, it's a good one.

    1. Brandon Bledsoe profile image55
      Brandon Bledsoeposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      thanks

  6. sockii profile image89
    sockiiposted 18 months ago

    My opinion is you need to stop spamming the forum repeatedly trying to get traffic to your hubs.

    1. FatFreddysCat profile image95
      FatFreddysCatposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      (crunch) sockii with a cinderblock for the win!!

  7. Dressage Husband profile image78
    Dressage Husbandposted 18 months ago

    @sockii Did you actually read any of his poems? I rather think not! He is just  newbie trying to find traction and his poetry is actually good.

    1. psycheskinner profile image82
      psycheskinnerposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      By spamming the forum 4 times, mostly in the wrong places.  He will get more traction by learning *not* to do that, and how to post the url of the hub he wants feedback on.

      1. Brandon Bledsoe profile image55
        Brandon Bledsoeposted 18 months ago in reply to this

        And how would I do that, because I thought we can't do that

    2. relache profile image87
      relacheposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      Just because you personally like a poem doesn't excuse a person from creating low-quality Hubs and then spamming the forums with them.

      1. Brandon Bledsoe profile image55
        Brandon Bledsoeposted 18 months ago in reply to this

        Actually I just made this about 2days ago n before I did that I was getting good recognition so its not low quality at all you can go see for your self if you want I did that because it was 2 new ones I just added, so talk what you know and I ain't about to argue over nonsense

        1. relache profile image87
          relacheposted 18 months ago in reply to this

          Brandon,

          I have no opinion about your poetry, but according to the rules about content on this site, your Hubs are low-quality.

          Since the Army requires you to read and understand rules, I suggest you do the same here.

          http://hubpages.com/faq/

          http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/

          1. Brandon Bledsoe profile image55
            Brandon Bledsoeposted 18 months ago in reply to this

            Bye

          2. Brandon Bledsoe profile image55
            Brandon Bledsoeposted 18 months ago in reply to this

            I appreciate your concern though

 
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