I'd like feedback on my Hub: How to Choose The best Bluetooth Speaker to Suit Yo

  1. Stephanie-Lynn profile image59
    Stephanie-Lynnposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub? This is my first article. I have to give credit to all the writers that post on a regular basis. I had no idea there was so much to it. I obviously didn't quite make the cut on the first try. I have edited some of the elements and added others. Removed some links and added personal experience. What else needs to be done?  I do plan on adding more photos of things like all my other portable speakers and possibly a video review if you think it might be helpful or add to my article.
        I plan on writing about cake decorating "How To's", recipes, kids, and maybe more tech stuff. I am not interested at this time in the money making features of this site but once I become a better writer I may turn on the feature in the future.

    How to Choose The best Bluetooth Speaker to Suit You. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thank you for your time, advice & consideration!

    Stephanie Lynn

    1. Millionaire Tips profile image89
      Millionaire Tipsposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Stephanie,

      You are off to a great start with this hub.  You have used original images for your hub, I think, which is great.  You also have huge chunks of text. Online readers want short hunks of text that are easy to digest.  I would recommend breaking up your text into short paragraphs to allow more space to make it easier to read.

      You use a lot of "I" statements which makes this hard for me to read. Make it about the reader and help them figure out how to compare the different speakers.  It is must a matter of having more confidence in what you are writing.

      The table is great, but it is so wide that you have to use a scroll bar to see it all.   Also there are two columns that don't have headings. Try to find a way to make it fit. One option is to take out the least important feature. Since you didn't mention portability as an important feature, maybe take out the dimensions. Another option is to combine the dimensions in one column to see if that will make it fit without scrolling.

      Your title says you will help the reader choose, but you go to the Mercury Box right away, and then it starts sounding like an advertisement.  Talk about the features first, thoroughly, and then go to explain why MB is the right choice.  I would include an Amazon capsule with the product instead of using a link. That way, you have a professional picture of it, and the reader has an easy way to get it if they are convinced.

  2. Stephanie-Lynn profile image59
    Stephanie-Lynnposted 14 months ago

    Hi Millionaire Tips!
         Thank you for taking the time to read my first hub,  actually it is my first article. It is really hard to pick an angle when your starting out. I think your tips are great & it makes perfect sense. I rearranged it several times trying to get it right. I did use original photos. They're not the best but I just had it when I went hiking and thought I'd take a few shots. 
       I will try to work on  it this weekend before starting my next hub. I think I'll be writing about cake decorating or kids.  Maybe a bit safer until I find my groove & gain confidence. Again thank you for taking the time to help me out!