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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Tour packages places vacation trip to beautiful Aus

  1. jagjou profile image57
    jagjouposted 21 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Tour packages places vacation trip to beautiful Australia (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Marisa Wright profile image93
      Marisa Wrightposted 21 months ago in reply to this

      I am confused by this Hub.  Your other two Hubs are written in good English with only the occasional grammatical or spelling mistake.  The English in this one is so bad, it's barely readable!  The title is obviously keyword-stuffed. 

      Are you sure your other Hubs are your own original work?  Are you using spinning software?  Both are illegal here on HubPages.

      If you cannot write your own articles in fluent English, you are wasting your time trying to publish on HubPages.

      1. jagjou profile image57
        jagjouposted 21 months ago in reply to this

        i agree 101% with your opinion. Thanks for critical eveluation

        1. jagjou profile image57
          jagjouposted 21 months ago in reply to this

          the opinion in your first part.

          For your last sentence..my language in the reply mail in itself will render a befitting answer...i suppose.

          Happy reading

          1. theraggededge profile image96
            theraggededgeposted 21 months ago in reply to this

            It makes for very unhappy reading.

            You won't be able to publish at HubPages until you improve your English language skills. It can be done, but it will take time.

            1. jagjou profile image57
              jagjouposted 21 months ago in reply to this

              i will wait till you teach me your shakespearean skills/jane austen skills.

      2. jagjou profile image57
        jagjouposted 21 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for your suggestion.


        My reply to your kind suggestions will render a fitting reply to your comment as the last sentence..can i suppose

    2. sallybea profile image97
      sallybeaposted 21 months ago in reply to this

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      1. jagjou profile image57
        jagjouposted 21 months ago in reply to this

        thanks for informing me of the researchgate.net public publication. For the first time i am coming to know of this.

  2. MomsTreasureChest profile image72
    MomsTreasureChestposted 21 months ago

    Welcome ty o HubPages, good luck with your writing!  I'd suggest adding more photos and increasing the amount of text.

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 21 months ago in reply to this

      Did you actually read the article that you are commenting on?

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    Getrude Hillaryposted 21 months ago

    Nice article. Consider adding more text. Also, cut down on product capsules. Ensure that the products you choose to market are relevant/directly related to your hub.

 
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