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I'd like feedback on my Hub: The murder- a short story

  1. Daanish jalhotra profile image74
    Daanish jalhotraposted 19 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The murder- a short story (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Marisa Wright profile image92
      Marisa Wrightposted 19 months ago in reply to this

      To be accepted, stories must have good English grammar and spelling.  Try copying your story into Word or a grammar/spell checker, and you'll find that you have many mistakes.

    2. Alison Dittmar profile image61
      Alison Dittmarposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      Generally speaking you must first read your own work through, checking for spelling and grammar. For example, in the first sentence I believe the word I is not capitalized (i) I is always capitalized.  Make corrections and you'll have a good story. Good luck.

  2. relache profile image88
    relacheposted 19 months ago

    If you use this article like a checklist, you will easily find areas of your Hub to improve.

    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/How- … y-of-a-Hub

  3. Daanish jalhotra profile image74
    Daanish jalhotraposted 18 months ago

    thanks!

 
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