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I'd like feedback on my Hub: When Silence Is Louder Than the Noise

  1. MissCue profile image73
    MissCueposted 17 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub When Silence Is Louder Than the Noise. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. SheilaMilne profile image89
      SheilaMilneposted 17 months ago in reply to this

      The Amazon modules for eye-shadow and vintage jewelry seem to have very little, if any, bearing on the subject.

      1. MissCue profile image73
        MissCueposted 17 months ago in reply to this

        I agree with you on the Amazon link, although in the Amazon module my keyword quirry was "Shadow"  and makeup was the result.... I will change the keywords to find something more appropriate.  Thanks for taking the time to read it....

        1. Phyllis Doyle profile image92
          Phyllis Doyleposted 17 months ago in reply to this

          Hi Helen. The Amazon link has nothing to do with the word shadow in your poem. Maybe try a link to a book about poetry or 'self realization'?  This is another thing that prevent passing QAP - having unrelated product links.

    2. Elsie Hagley profile image81
      Elsie Hagleyposted 17 months ago in reply to this

      I'm not sure on this one, but all your photos credits, when clicked on take you to your page on FaceBook,
      Would be interested if this is allowed.

      1. MissCue profile image73
        MissCueposted 17 months ago in reply to this

        Hi Elsie,
        Thanks for taking the time to read my hubpage.  The pictures that are in my hub page were all done in hand by me.  The module requests source of the art which is by me.  I suppose I will check on the rules for that.  Thanks again.

        1. Elsie Hagley profile image81
          Elsie Hagleyposted 17 months ago in reply to this

          That's fine, all the photos are yours, only it's the first time I have seen the person name linked to their facebook page, I was wondering if it was allowed.
          Have a nice day.

        2. Phyllis Doyle profile image92
          Phyllis Doyleposted 17 months ago in reply to this

          All you have to do is put your name in as the source. Directing the source to FaceBook may be one of the reasons the hub has not yet passed QAP.

    3. Vagabond Laborer profile image87
      Vagabond Laborerposted 17 months ago in reply to this

      Your writing, like your poem, is very ethereal and hard to pin down (not necessarily all a bad thing!).  Perhaps if you gave examples of "Ethereal moments" more concretely it would hold the poem together a little bit more.
      I love the title, by the way.

      1. MissCue profile image73
        MissCueposted 17 months ago in reply to this

        Hi Vagabond.....thanks for taking the time to read my hubpage.  I appreciate your input..... will try to figure out how to mix ethereal with concrete...and see what I come up with....lol.....take care!!! Helen

    4. Phyllis Doyle profile image92
      Phyllis Doyleposted 17 months ago in reply to this

      Hi again, Helen. I would take out the bolding in your poem. Bold words should only be used for capsule sub-titles.

      Your link to Vintage jewelry does not relate to your poem hub. Again, find a product or quote that relates to the hub topic.

      Your opening image at the top is an Edgar Allen Poe quote and that should be noted in your source. The image was drawn by you, but the quote is Poe's.

      I do like your poem. It seems like a journey into Self, contemplating and reflecting. Very nice.

 
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