I have really tried to do something different here; tired of seeing rewording of the same ol stuff. Please let me know if you find this helpful and how so that I may continue to deepen this work.
http://carynbickel.hubpages.com/hub/Str … tless-Mind
Looks really interesting and a good basis for more hubs on a similar theme.
I think you should break your text up into at least three modules with sub-headings and have an image on the right of the intro module. Blocky paragraphs are hard to read on a screen and a little 'white space' will rest the eye as it travels down the page. So split the text into shorter paragraphs.
Your photo title, 'Choose Your Images' and its caption don't link to anything in the text, so you might connect it by mentioning how positive images can help with stress.
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