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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Top 5 places that you will love to visit in your Au

  1. shadsiddiqui profile image61
    shadsiddiquiposted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Top 5 places that you will love to visit in your Australia Holiday (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 20 months ago in reply to this

      The title could do with refining:

      *Do you want to use title case or not? If not then 'Holiday' should be lower case.
      *Do you really want to use the word 'holiday'? Americans would say 'vacation'. Brits, Europeans and Aussies would say 'holiday'.
      *You should replace 'in' with 'on'. It's 'in Australia' but 'on holiday'.

      To be honest, if I was looking for information on visiting Australia, I'd find your hub way too general. I would suggest you narrow it down to '5 Best Places to Visit in Melbourne' or '5 Top Destinations on the Gold Coast'. Very few people traverse the whole Australian continent in a couple of weeks, it's simply too vast.

    2. creativearts2009 profile image86
      creativearts2009posted 20 months ago in reply to this

      Its "Australian holiday" and Australian map" not Australia. My other comments are on your hub.

    3. Elsie Hagley profile image82
      Elsie Hagleyposted 20 months ago in reply to this

      Don't forget to give credit for your photos, otherwise I think you have done a great job for your first hub.
      Don't give up you are doing a good job promoting Australia, great place.

  2. shadsiddiqui profile image61
    shadsiddiquiposted 20 months ago

    Thank you for you comments, really appreciate.

  3. Marisa Wright profile image93
    Marisa Wrightposted 20 months ago

    Personally I'd hate anyone to rely on this Hub to decide where to visit in Australia, because those are definitely not the top 5 destinations in Australia.

    1. Jay Young1 profile image60
      Jay Young1posted 8 months ago in reply to this

      G DAY! I love these five and been to all. ( :

      1. theraggededge profile image96
        theraggededgeposted 8 months ago in reply to this

        This thread is a year old sad

        1. shadsiddiqui profile image61
          shadsiddiquiposted 8 months ago in reply to this

          Yes, it is old. Thank you anyways.

 
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