I would like some feedback

  1. tgopfrich profile image80
    tgopfrichposted 16 months ago

    I would like some feedback on some of my hubs, mostly the more current one http://tgopfrich.hubpages.com/hub/Game-kids
    I haven't wrote a hub in a while and just want to know of any improvements I can make in my writing style or otherwise.
    Thank you

 
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