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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Defining My Purpose on HubPages...

  1. DasEngel profile image60
    DasEngelposted 13 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some feedback on my work. Will you please give feedback on my hub: Defining My Purpose on HubPages: Aftermath of My Wars on HubPages Forums. Thanks.

    1. Mark Ewbie profile image84
      Mark Ewbieposted 13 months ago

      For a first HubPage article that is really quite adequate.  The titling could be improved by using SEO tools - I may have a referral ink...

      Oh no, sorry I don't.

      I didn't quite get what you were selling.  There were no Amazon adverts so that is a big bad which you may want to correct in order to make big bucks.

      The article was quite long but it was nicely formatted so I award it 3 out of 5 for no particular reason.

      I have voted it up, shared it on all forms of media including the local Parish Gazette and will be your loyal follower for approximately five minutes.

      Good luck with your future at HP!

      1. DasEngel profile image60
        DasEngelposted 13 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks, Mark. Check out the Recommended Hubs section at the end of my hub. It's showing up some pretty amazing results!

    2. Marisa Wright profile image91
      Marisa Wrightposted 13 months ago

      Thanks for the laugh, DasEngel.

    3. Pico Triano profile image82
      Pico Trianoposted 13 months ago

      I thought it was a great Hub. I like to have fun but sometimes I like to make some money too.