I'd like feedback on my hub: Fender Blues Junior III review

  1. Adam Harkus profile image61
    Adam Harkusposted 13 months ago


    I'm trying to improve the content of my hubs with more detail now, and would like to know your thoughts...

    http://adamharkus.hubpages.com/hub/Fend … III-review

    Many thanks


    1. chasmac profile image99
      chasmacposted 13 months ago in reply to this

      It looks good to me. Apart from a couple of typos, it's well written and it's a very fair hands-on review covering the positives and negatives. I especially like the features list as you've included a lot of info that can be seen at a glance, which is useful. You seem to have covered everything, so I don't know what other content you would need. Great Hub.

  2. psycheskinner profile image82
    psycheskinnerposted 13 months ago

    The review looks great.  My only suggestion would be to put the Amazon module for each product next to the place in the text where you first mention it.