I'd like feedback on my Hub: How Chocolate can Improve your Life (7 Scientific B

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    RosyinAusposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How Chocolate can Improve your Life (7 Scientific Benefits) (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. WriteAngled profile image92
      WriteAngledposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      Well firstly you need to get rid of the link to a blog post that is about exactly the same topic. That is probably the main reason why your hub is not passing assessment.

      Secondly, though, you claim to be writing about scientific benefits, presumably meaning scientifically-proven, yet you do not reference any of the original scientific journal papers in which these findings were reported. In my opinion, that significantly lessens the credibility of what you are saying.

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        RosyinAusposted 15 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks very much WriteAngled! I will improve on the points you have mentioned. smile

 
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