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I'd like feedback on my Hub: President Obama and the Supreme Court Justices

  1. mio cid profile image59
    mio cidposted 17 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub President Obama and the Supreme Court Justices. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. lisavollrath profile image90
      lisavollrathposted 17 months ago in reply to this

      I read the first sentence, and stopped. Random commas, and a run on sentence. You need to work on your grammar and sentence structure, and get a handle on when to use a comma, and when to end your sentence and start a new one.

      1. mio cid profile image59
        mio cidposted 17 months ago in reply to this

        thank you .I will work on it.

  2. Elsie Hagley profile image80
    Elsie Hagleyposted 17 months ago

    As lisavollrath said, using commas and full stops, don't leave a space between the last letter and the comma etc. I see you have that problems with your other hubs also.
    Break down your writing by using more paragraphs, also use more text modules and post larger pictures.
    Your photos need image credits if you have permission to use them.

 
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