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I'd like feedback on my Hub: For Love Or Money: Caring For The Elderly

  1. janiek13 profile image80
    janiek13posted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub For Love Or Money: Caring For The Elderly. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image93
      theraggededgeposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      I'd suggest shorter paragraphs/text modules and a clearer introduction.

      Personally, I'd start the hub with the section, "There are many different reasons why an elderly person may need specialized care. It can be that they are no longer physically able to care for themselves or it can be that their mental facilities have deteriorated to the point that is no longer safe for them to be alone. Some older people only need help a few hours a week for difficult chores or companionship, while other need around the clock care."

      I'd also take out the Amazon ad for the electric mobility scooter as it doesn't pertain to anything directly in the article.

      HTH

      1. janiek13 profile image80
        janiek13posted 15 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you, I will give it a shot

  2. Fahsionboots profile image71
    Fahsionbootsposted 15 months ago

    you could also add that you've taken caring for people in general one step further. Instead of "treat others like yourself" but more "Treat others how THEY would like to be treated"
    hope this helps

    1. janiek13 profile image80
      janiek13posted 15 months ago in reply to this

      Thank you, it all helps. I will be implementing changes soon.

 
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