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I would like feedback on my article

  1. Skyler Saunders profile image78
    Skyler Saundersposted 19 months ago

    Please help me get my article featured.  It is entitled "Ignite to Inspire". Thank you in advance.

    1. Kylyssa profile image95
      Kylyssaposted 19 months ago in reply to this

      You'll have to link to it so we can see it as hubs don't get indexed until they're featured.

      1. Skyler Saunders profile image78
        Skyler Saundersposted 19 months ago in reply to this

        How do I link it?

    2. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 19 months ago in reply to this

      Skyler, I read a few of your hubs and you have a good writing style. However, you need to spend some time learning how to create a good-looking hub. Just entering words into a single text capsule isn't going to work.

      1. You need searchable titles, not clever ones.
      2. You need copyright free, relevant images, especially at the top of your hubs. They must include a source. Better yet, use your own.
      3. You need to break the text up as it is off-putting to be faced with a wall of words.

      How to do this and more is here: http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 19 months ago

    So long as it is published, just go to it and copy the address starting http: and paste it here.

    1. Skyler Saunders profile image78
      Skyler Saundersposted 19 months ago in reply to this
      1. Kylyssa profile image95
        Kylyssaposted 19 months ago in reply to this

        First off, it's way too short and contains far too few specific facts (who, what, when, where, why, how, etc.) to match the magazine-like format HubPages prefers for editorials. But I'm guessing it's just way too controversial to get through QAP even if you filled it out, sourced it, and tightened its focus.

        1. Skyler Saunders profile image78
          Skyler Saundersposted 19 months ago in reply to this

          Thank you for your pointed, focused criticism. I did tip the controversy scale on this one.  I'll just count this as a loss and strive to create more sound works on HubPages.

  3. Jodah profile image86
    Jodahposted 19 months ago

    Though a controversial topic it is well written and you may get it through the censors here, but to be any chance of being featured you would need to add photos, maybe a video, and break up the text into more than one capsule for a start.

 
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