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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Book Pillows: Supporting Readers Everywhere

  1. KeemaWolf profile image83
    KeemaWolfposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Book Pillows: Supporting Readers Everywhere. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. galleryofgrace profile image83
      galleryofgraceposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      Sales hubs are not allowed!

  2. kenyaentrepreneur profile image85
    kenyaentrepreneurposted 14 months ago

    I think it would be helpful to remove references to squids and lenses now that it is a hub. I also think it is a mistake to say in big letters that you don't actually own one of the products you are writing about.

    But I think the biggest problem with passing the QAP is the hub doesn't have enough words. If you take the text from within the amazon capsules and put it into text capsules it might help, but I still suspect you will need to write more.

    1. KeemaWolf profile image83
      KeemaWolfposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      Please, where do I write in big letters that I don't have one of the products? I've just reread the hub and can't find where you mean.

      1. kenyaentrepreneur profile image85
        kenyaentrepreneurposted 14 months ago in reply to this

        "I confess! I don't myself actually have a designated book pillow!
        But what I do have is a lap table!"

      2. galleryofgrace profile image83
        galleryofgraceposted 14 months ago in reply to this

        You can only review products from your own personal use.

 
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